2010-05-17 [NOOOPE]: I like the metaphor being played with, with the eye being the window to the soul and there being a window and an eye. My problem is the image and the smooth background sorta clash. Maybe if there were more shapes like the one above the eye making a design all around, the BG wouldn't be as distracting.

2010-05-17 [Chel.]: I agree. I think if there was some sort of repeated pattern or texture, the piece would look a lot more complete.
Also, I think the curtains should be a different color... they blend in with the water.

2010-05-18 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: I like it, very abstract.
The only crit that I can think of giving is that it seems a little "off center". Maybe adding a little more something to it would balance it out?

2010-05-18 [arthemis_]: You are all right, I guess. I also am distracted by the effects, I played with the effects too much, I think. It's not equal. I probably will play with this piece a little more, maybe make a digital version of it :)

2010-05-18 [Pnelma Tirian]: This looks awesome. I love the symbolism and the nice blue design at the top--sort of watery and pebbly at the same time. I would try making a .png of it and deleting the background completely to see how it looks hovering in space.